Weddingbee boards

So, I have scowered the internet/blogs/friends/ etc to find great invite wording. I have compiled everything and come up with 2 examples that I really like.

Which one do you bees like better, would you change or add anything??
PS, it isnt 100% done. This is my almost finished product kinda thing. Clearly the alignment might be different, once I get it into word and everything.

We are a fun loving couple, not to stuffy. So I didnt want to make the invite TOO formal. bc that, we are not.

Thank you!! :)

Example 1:

He proposed to her on bended knee,
He asked “will you travel through life with me?”
Megan S____
Said “YES!” to
Cory T____.
Together with their parents,
They invite you to share in their joy,
On one of life’s lovliest journies – Love.
Saturday, the fifth of May
Two thousand and twelve
At one thirty in the afternoon at
Landmark Baptist Church
1600 Glendale Milford Road
Cincinnati, OH 45___ 

Reception to follow

Example 2:

How beautiful is the day that is touched by love….
Together with our parents, we
Megan S____
And
Cory T_____
Invite you to share with us a celebration
Of our love.
The ceremony will be held
Saturday, the fifth of May
Two thousand and twelve
At one thirty in the afternoon at
Landmark Baptist Church
1600 Glendale Milford Road
Cincinnati, OH 45___

Reception to follow

*bump* :)

yea, there are a few tweaks I see that I want to make. :)
But thank you ladies. :)