(Closed) Is this too wordy?

posted 7 years ago in Paper
Post # 3
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9825 posts
Buzzing Beekeeper

Yup, a litte. I’d revise it if possible.

Mr and Mrs Bill Jones

request the honour of your presence

at the wedding of their daughter Magdelena

to Mr. John Smith

son of Mr. and Mrs. Bob Smith

The ceremony will commence at

Two o’clock in the afternoon

Saturday, October fifteenth

at the Church of St. Mary

Anywhere, Ohio

and afterward at the reception

Banquet Hall X

Main Street and West 50th Street

Post # 5
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1684 posts
Bumble bee
  • Wedding: October 2011

If your reception is in a different location, include it on a separate card.
I agree with you about the Nupital Mass. You kinda have to include it! 🙂

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