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Just finished writing my vows and I need feedback please!

posted 3 years ago in Beehive
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    WinniBride    9/27/08   Meredith, NH

    Please let me know what you think:

    <span class="msgbodytext"><font size="3"><font face="Calibri">The poet Rumi said: The minute I heard my first love story, I started looking for you, not knowing how blind that was. Lovers don’t finally meet somewhere. They’re in each other all along.</font></font><span class="msgbodytext"><font face="Calibri" size="3"> </font><span class="msgbodytext"><font size="3"><font face="Calibri">From the moment I met you, I felt a natural comfort; it is the same comfort I’ve always felt with my brother, my mom, and my dad.  Our values and passions in life have been inside us all along, and they materialized into the relationship that brought us here today. I will always recognize that part of me in you.</font></font><span class="msgbodytext"><font face="Calibri" size="3"> </font> <p style="margin: 0in 0in 0pt" class="MsoNormal"><font size="3"><font face="Calibri"><span class="msgbodytext">I promise to always reach for your hand when things get tough.  I promise to have an open ear, and an open heart.  I promise to always try to make you laugh, even if I’m the only one laughing at my joke. I promise to cherish all of our adventures, wherever they take us around the world – including the ones that will take place in our home as we grow our family.  I can’t promise I’ll always be the same, but I will always be your Lindsay – and I will always be true to you - in good times and in bad.

    <span class="msgbodytext">You are my best friend and I love you.</font></font>

     

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    bonniebelle101    March 15, 2008   Charlotte, NC

    Ahhhhh! So beautiful! I litterally got chills sitting here at my desk at work! I really love the part about him being a part of you all along!Good luck!

     
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    Maude    June 29, 2008   Oakland, CA

    Perfect!  And moving.  I'm not sure what kind of feedback you're looking for (vows are so personal) but this is just right - heartfelt but not cheesy.

     
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    WinniBride    9/27/08   Meredith, NH

    Thank you for your comments! Yes - I just want to make sure they aren't too cheesy. And I wanted to make sure it wasn't too long. I thought it might be weird to include a quote in there - but i just love it so much that I had to...

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    StrawberryBaby    August 22 2009  

    Wow!  That's so lovely! 

     

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