(Closed) My invitation wording needs help!!

posted 8 years ago in Paper
Post # 4
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1927 posts
Buzzing bee

The above is too confusing.  There are so many people listed and they are in a strange order.

Are you ok with not recognizing that you paid?  If so.. I would just use traditional wording that says

Ms. Elizabeth V requests the honor of your presense at the marriage of her daughter

Madeline A

to

Dustin Z

son of Mr. and Mrs. Dennis Z

 

If you don’t like that option than just do Madeline A and Dustin Z together with their parents request the honor of your presense at their marriage.

Post # 5
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272 posts
Helper bee

it took me a few times through to understand what you were trying to say – it’s very confusing right now who is actually being married. do you need your guests to know who paid for everything? if not, why not just let your mom be the honorary hostess, and use traditional wording?

If you must stick with what you wrote, at least split up your name on a different line from your fiance’s, since you have different last names at this point.  Otherwise, it sounds like you’re brother & sister!

What about…

the honor of your presence is requested at the marriage of

ms. mom’s daughter,

bride

to

groom

son of mr. and mrs. groom

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