My invitations, I think this is the final draft. Critiques?

posted 4 years ago in Paper
Post # 4
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Busy bee
  • Wedding: September 2013

I would change the “adult reception to follow” to say “Adult only reception to follow.”  But that is just mho.  I think it looks great though!

Post # 6
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Busy bee
  • Wedding: September 2013

@Purple_Bride:  Well, I think it conveys the fact that children are not welcome more clearly.  “Adult reception” makes me think of a reception at a strip club.  Haha!  I don’t think it will seem rude.  It is your wedding and it is what you want.  No need to mince words.

Post # 7
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Helper bee
  • Wedding: January 2013

I think they look lovely, and agree that putting adult only is not rude. Make it clear, I didn’t and am going to regret  it.

Post # 8
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Sugar bee
  • Wedding: August 2013

I think they look wonderful! Yay!

Post # 9
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Busy bee
  • Wedding: December 2014

@MrsM914:  +1, it does sound that way!!

Post # 10
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Bee Keeper
  • Wedding: March 2014

I think they are mostly great. I think the names should perhaps be a bit bigger.

And I agree with PP. “Adult reception” makes me think of a key party or something. “Adult-only” would not read as rude to me.

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