So happy with my invites! Can I get fresh eyes to proof read?

posted 3 years ago in Paper
Post # 4
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Helper bee

I’ve always been in love with that type of lace pattern! Great choice, and I love the colours!

Post # 5
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Bumble bee
  • Wedding: June 2014

They’re beautiful, I love the lace and the colors. Are you inviting any single guests? If so, you may want to consider “___ seat(s) have been reserved” instead of “____ seats.” Particularly since you have “Name(s)” on the next line.

Post # 7
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Helper bee
  • Wedding: October 2013

I read it over, and I think the “seat(s)” is the only thing I would change. The rest looks great.

Post # 8
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Bumble bee
  • Wedding: August 2014

Besides the above mentioned, looks good! They’re very pretty invites!

Post # 9
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Sugar Beekeeper
  • Wedding: April 2012

i like them.

Post # 10
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Busy bee

Between their, them, their again, and they in a single breath on the invitation, it reads a little funny to me. I would suggest:

TOGETHER WITH THEIR FAMILIES
[NAMES]
INVITE YOU TO JOIN
IN A CELEBRATION OF LOVE AND COMMITMENT
AS THEY BECOME HUSBAND AND WIFE

Post # 11
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Busy bee

Looks great 🙂

Post # 12
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Buzzing bee
  • Wedding: July 2014

Lok the color combo, looks awesome!!!!

Post # 13
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Bumble bee
  • Wedding: June 2014

@shaka:  Even 

INVITE YOU TO JOIN THEM
IN A CELEBRATION OF LOVE AND COMMITMENT
AS THEY BECOME HUSBAND AND WIFE

might flow a little bit better.

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