My MOH painted my invitations, proofs for printing inside!

posted 6 months ago in Paper
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Busy bee
  • Wedding: March 2017

Oh those are beautful! I love them!

Post # 3
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Helper bee
  • Wedding: December 1995

The flowers are beautiful.  She’s very talented!  You are going to have lovely invitations.

Now, I’m old school, so here are a few things that bother me. 

I don’t care for the lack capital letters on the words and then your names in all caps.  Seems odd to me.  The boldness of the all caps on your names and the lines around the date give off a different vibe than the romantic image of the flowers and the other font.  

I’d like a comma between happiness and love.  

The You Betcha! on the RSVP card bothers me too.  I’m not big on slang on formal invites.  

Post # 4
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Sugar bee
  • Wedding: April 2017

Pretty! 

Post # 5
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Bumble bee
  • Wedding: August 2015

Those are gorgeous! I love those colors.

Post # 6
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Helper bee

PaperQueen :  exact same things are bothering me! Was literally gonna comment the same things before I saw your comment

But yes, overall, these are stunning invites and your MOH is super talented! 

Post # 7
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Sugar bee
  • Wedding: September 2012 - Southern California

The art is BEAUTIFUL & your name is amazing, if I don’t say so myself! 😉

Some suggestions though.. I would make the first phrase a complete sentence & capitalize the P, insert a comma after happiness, & end the sentence with a period.

Post # 9
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Bumble bee

It’s really pretty..I bet you’re super pleased with the outcome.

Post # 10
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Helper bee
  • Wedding: January 2017

teacher-bee-in-the-sea :  

oh, I love it as is (sometimes long names look weird in fancy fonts- I struggled to find one that my full name- Dannielle- looked good in)!

I also LOVe that you put that it’s an outdoor reception to follow cause it lets guests appropriately dress for the climate 🙂 so thoughtful!

 

Post # 11
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Helper bee
  • Wedding: October 2016

Very nice but I do not like “You betcha” part though

Post # 12
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Bee Keeper

Very pretty. And such an extra special thing. 

Post # 13
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Honey bee

Very pretty, I agree with some PP’s Re: wording and boldness, but stunning invites.

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