My MOH painted my invitations, proofs for printing inside!

posted 4 weeks ago in Paper
Post # 2
Member
471 posts
Helper bee
  • Wedding: March 2017

Oh those are beautful! I love them!

Post # 3
Member
199 posts
Blushing bee
  • Wedding: December 1995

The flowers are beautiful.  She’s very talented!  You are going to have lovely invitations.

Now, I’m old school, so here are a few things that bother me. 

I don’t care for the lack capital letters on the words and then your names in all caps.  Seems odd to me.  The boldness of the all caps on your names and the lines around the date give off a different vibe than the romantic image of the flowers and the other font.  

I’d like a comma between happiness and love.  

The You Betcha! on the RSVP card bothers me too.  I’m not big on slang on formal invites.  

Post # 4
Member
1414 posts
Bumble bee
  • Wedding: April 2017

Pretty! 

Post # 5
Hostess
994 posts
Busy bee
  • Wedding: August 2015

Those are gorgeous! I love those colors.

Post # 6
Member
53 posts
Worker bee

PaperQueen :  exact same things are bothering me! Was literally gonna comment the same things before I saw your comment

But yes, overall, these are stunning invites and your MOH is super talented! 

Post # 7
Member
2340 posts
Buzzing bee
  • Wedding: September 2012 - Southern California

The art is BEAUTIFUL & your name is amazing, if I don’t say so myself! 😉

Some suggestions though.. I would make the first phrase a complete sentence & capitalize the P, insert a comma after happiness, & end the sentence with a period.

Post # 9
Member
553 posts
Busy bee

It’s really pretty..I bet you’re super pleased with the outcome.

Post # 10
Member
245 posts
Helper bee
  • Wedding: January 2017

teacher-bee-in-the-sea :  

oh, I love it as is (sometimes long names look weird in fancy fonts- I struggled to find one that my full name- Dannielle- looked good in)!

I also LOVe that you put that it’s an outdoor reception to follow cause it lets guests appropriately dress for the climate 🙂 so thoughtful!

 

Post # 11
Member
92 posts
Worker bee
  • Wedding: October 2016

Very nice but I do not like “You betcha” part though

Post # 12
Member
4851 posts
Honey bee

Very pretty. And such an extra special thing. 

Post # 13
Member
4145 posts
Honey bee

Very pretty, I agree with some PP’s Re: wording and boldness, but stunning invites.

Leave a comment


Get our weekly roundup of the best of Weddingbee.
I agree to receive emails from the site. I can withdraw my consent at any time by unsubscribing.

Find Amazing Vendors