My revised save the dates :)

posted 3 years ago in Paper
Post # 4
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Buzzing Beekeeper

@FutureMrsHallam:  It looks much better! I would have changed everything to a simpler font but if you love something, you love it. I am able to read it so that’s all I care about.

One other suggestion – there is no standard for numbering dates. I suggest putting 4-Oct-14 just to make it evident. Some people may think it is April 10, 2014 if you don’t. It’s easier if you don’t make people think.

Post # 5
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Busy bee
  • Wedding: June 2014

@FutureMrsHallam:  I like this a lot better! Not so busy so I can really take in all the important information and the picture:) 

ETA-And I agree with mrs. Panda, I would definitely do something with the date to make it more evident it’s in October! I didn’t even notice your WB wedding date and definitely thought you were getting married in April.

Post # 8
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Sugar bee
  • Wedding: May 2014 - Madison, WI

@FutureMrsHallam:  Looks good. Yes, as an American I thought initally it was April not October. 

Post # 11
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Sugar Beekeeper
  • Wedding: August 2013

It looks much cleaner now (especially with October spelled out), but I’m still not a fan. I don’t like the font, and it would look much better with two fonts (I’d do a script for “save the date” and your names and then a complementary font for the date and “formal invitation to follow”). Here are tons of great pairings, lots of script/non-script suggestions.

Anddd I just noticed the ampersand behind your names and I love that.

Post # 12
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Buzzing Beekeeper

@vorpalette:  +1, the font still doesn’t work for me and neither does have the date on 2 separate lines.

Post # 15
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Buzzing Beekeeper

@FutureMrsHallam:  I would literally put 4-Oct-14. It’s exactly what you had before, just spelling out the month in short form.

Post # 16
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Busy bee
  • Wedding: June 2014

@FutureMrsHallam:  these revisions are getting better and better! Love the ampersand behin your names! 

And I agree with, @MrsPanda99: , I’d love to see a version where the date looks like 4-Oct-14. It’s worth a try at least:) 

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