(Closed) My save the date mockup!

posted 6 years ago in Paper
  • poll: Keep it?
    Love it! Don't change anything! (White background) : (3 votes)
    27 %
    Love it! Don't change anything! (Ivory background) : (1 votes)
    9 %
    I'd change a few things (please say what in the comments!) : (3 votes)
    27 %
    Like the one with dates : (2 votes)
    18 %
    Like the one with fewer words : (2 votes)
    18 %
  • Post # 3
    7561 posts
    Bumble Beekeeper
    • Wedding: January 2013

    I like the relationship landmarks but why don’t you include the date they happened? 

    Post # 5
    3799 posts
    Honey bee
    • Wedding: September 2018

    Not a fan of the dates.  And I prefer the pale lilac background.  They’re sweet!

    ETA: the first one looks lilac to me on my screen, but I’m guessing it must be the white one.  I still prefer white to ivory/cream 🙂

    Post # 6
    1512 posts
    Bumble bee
    • Wedding: September 2013

    I like the dates, but I think maybe make them a couple sizes smaller and drop them down a line so it doesn’t look so awkward.

    Post # 8
    1512 posts
    Bumble bee
    • Wedding: September 2013

    @allegrovivo:  That one is ok as well, but from a design standpoint, I don’t like how everything isn’t lined up the same. It either all needs to have some sort of center line where the left or right side bumps up to it, or keep it all centered.

    Post # 9
    385 posts
    Helper bee
    • Wedding: March 2014

    I would use the one with dates, but put the date in a smaller font above the “first met” line.

    Post # 10
    2125 posts
    Buzzing bee
    • Wedding: July 2012

    I like the dates, but I think you should consider how it looks if you take out the “they’re getting married part”….since it tells a story…and the bottom is sort of the ending where it announces when and where you will be wed.


    Just a thought.

    Post # 11
    786 posts
    Busy bee
    • Wedding: December 2014

    @allegrovivo:  I think I like the 2nd one with fewer words. I like the first one, but I think I got thrown off at the “they cried” part. While I totally get what you were going for, not sure if its the right feeling for a STD (such a sad event, where you were crying).

    But I really love the simpler wording – its SUPER sweet. I would probably change the bottom to:



    October 13, 2012

    Granite Bay, California

    Invitation to follow

    Since you mentioned above already that you are getting married, you wouldn’t need to restate below.  Otherwise, i really like it!

    Post # 12
    38 posts
    • Wedding: June 2012

    I love the last one you posted 

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