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    quishi    March 17, 2012   Guaynabo, Puerto Rico

    I wrote my vows tonight, please let me know what you think. =D

     

    Antonio, I didn’t know when I met you how lucky I was to have found you. It didn’t take me long to realize how special you are, and to understand that what we’ve shared all these years is truly worth fighting for. Through the ups and downs, the great times and the tears, my love for you has never wavered. I have always, and will always be yours.

    Now, as I stand before you, ready to become your wife, I know that you are my past, my present, and my future. I love your strength and your tenderness, your ability to sincerely listen to me, and your ability to make me laugh. I love that you’re the last person I see at night and the person I wake up to every morning. You are my best friend, my comfort and support, my confidant, my shoulder to cry on, and my comic relief. I can’t imagine a better life than one spent by your side.

    Today, I promise to always hold on to the love that we share, to take time for us and appreciate us. I promise to be honest with you and forever faithful to you. I will strive at every moment to create a place for open communication so that you will always know that we can talk about anything and that we can get through anything. I promise to support you and encourage you, and to strive for compromise whenever we disagree. I promise to never judge you and to always want what’s best for you. I promise to encourage you and to help you achieve what you want from life. I will try to be strong when you are feeling weak. I will try to look past the petty things that should ever stand between us. I will try to forgive when forgiveness is in order. I will try to stay humble and admit my mistakes. I will try my best to always make you happy and to always strive to be everything that you deserve in a partner. Above all else, I promise to be there for you, always, no matter what life throws our way, and to love you, sincerely and passionately, for as long as I live.

     
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    CoCoCourtney      

    I think it sounds really nice, maybe a little long though. 

     
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    zdb    October 2012  

    I agree - it sounds great, but it seems a little long.

     
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    MissTX    May 17, 2013   Texas

    I agree maybe a TAD long (only because I've always heard the traditional sort of quick vows) but the words are really beautiful. As long as you dont mind the length, I thinik it's awesome! <3

     
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    little_cricket    August 11, 2012   Bay Area

    I think it's soooo sweet. It doesn't seem that long. I'm writing my own vows too and dreading it

     
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    bestbuddies    June 6, 2010   Chicago, Illinois

    These are very nice. however, pretty long. You need to cut it down. Good luck!

     
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    quishi    March 17, 2012   Guaynabo, Puerto Rico

    Thanks for your input. I don't mind the length and when read out-loud I don't think it's too long. I actually timed myself, and it comes to about 1.5 min (taking a couple of pauses in case I start to choke up). Seeing as how this is the most meaningful part of the ceremony to us, I think that's ok... 

     
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    AubByAub    December 2017  

    @quishi:  I like them. I think it looks long but it doesn't take long to read it so I think it's fine.  Good job!

     
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    sugarpea    June 14, 2014   Ontario, Canada

    I think they're sweet (: if I was a guest at your wedding I would totally tear up ;)

     
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    sunnywoods    October 5, 2012  

    I love when ppl write their own vows. They r great words and I don't think they are too long. :)

     
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    Jamcnair    October 20, 2012   Morristown, Tennessee

    beautiful words

     
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    Juliepants    June 2, 2012   Ontario

    Very emotional!  Just make sure that he takes care to write similar vows so he's not left standing up there stuttering with 3 lines written down on a napkin, you know?  Hehe.  :)

     
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    hannahlily    June 1, 2013  

    They sound wonderful! We couldn't decide if we wanted to write our own vows...but reading these is really making me want to!

     
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    moosey    September 22, 2012   Ontario

    Very sweet! This is probably me being lucky but there seems to be "strive for" repeated a lot in the last paragraph though.

     
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    AmeliaBedelia    March 3, 2012   Georgia

    Those are beautifully written. :) I like them.

     
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    pengoala    September 4, 2011  

    Beautiful!  I actually don't think they are long at all.  They just look long here on the boards - Have you timed them? I imagine they're about 1-2 minutes tops.

     
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    quishi    March 17, 2012   Guaynabo, Puerto Rico

    @Juliepants:  Lol!

     
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    quishi    March 17, 2012   Guaynabo, Puerto Rico

    @moosey: Good find. I hadn't noticed that. I'll try the thesaurus. ;)  

    @hannahlily: Awww that's sweet =D  It took a bit of convincing because my FI is a little reserved with his feelings in public, but after I gave up trying, he decided he wanted to do it too! I think it makes the moment a lot more personal for us. 

     
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    Dandelion D    April 13, 2013   Virginia

    I think they are very touching!

     
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    moosey    September 22, 2012   Ontario

    @quishi:  I should say that by lucky I meant picky - damn you iPhone! :)

     
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    FiFiKib    December 1, 2012  

    Those vows are beautiful. It does not seem too long. I agree to just make sure that the length of his vows are going to be similar to yours so that it doesn't seem odd.

     
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    quishi    March 17, 2012   Guaynabo, Puerto Rico

    @moosey:  Lol! yeah i figured...

     
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    they are nice, but you might want to skip a few sentences.   half the time the guests don't hear/understand what you are saying. i know i don't.    i think it's for you and your husband, the people in front and your wedding  party.  they are the ones that hear it. everyone else usually can't.

     
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    atalante    May 19, 2012  

    @roxymalone:  actually, it might depend on how the ceremony is set up. I know our DJ will be providing a mic for ours, so hopefully everyone will be able to hear.

     

    OP, they're really sweet! Great job!

     
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    quishi    March 17, 2012   Guaynabo, Puerto Rico

    @atalante:  thanks, yeah that was really important to me to. we have a mic set up right next to us because I definitely want to make sure everyone hears the ceremony. That's kinda the whole reason everyone's there you know, the wedding...

     
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    Jacqui90    May 14, 2016   Brisbane

    they are perfect :) i teared up a little!

     
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    Jessoverall    June 2, 2012  

    long schmong THEY ARE PERFECT :)

     
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    Kate0558    June 8, 2013   NC

    i like it... last paragraph is long tho. i think a few sentences could be taken out or edited.

     

     

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