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    bridget_124    July 24, 2010  

    I am needing some help, in creating my invites.  I love the quote at top and want it someway to tie into the body of the invite.  I also feel like the wording right now is kinda blah, so i'm wanting to make it better.  Any suggestions would be wonderful.  Here is how the invite reads right now...

    "Once in a while
    Right In the Middle of an ordinary life
    Love gives us a fairytale"

    Mr. and Mrs Bride
    and
    Mr. and Mrs Groom
    invite you to share in the joy
    of the uniting in marrieage of their children

    Bride
    &
    Groom

    on Saturday, the twenty fourth day of July
    two thousand and ten
    at two o'clock in the afternoon

     
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    kjpugs    March 20, 2010   Indianapolis, IN

    Not sure what should and shouldn't be capitalized...

    Also I think this:

    invite you to share in the joy 
    of the uniting in marrieage of their children

    Should be:

    invite you to share in the joy 
    of the uniting their children in marriage

    And make sure marriage is spelled right!

     
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    Future Mrs. Martin    August 21, 2010   London Ontario Canada

    What about something like this? I bolded what I changed!

    "Once in a while 
    Right In the Middle of an ordinary life
    Love gives us a fairytale"

    Mr. and Mrs Bride
    and 
    Mr. and Mrs Groom
    invite you to witness a real life fairytale as

    Bride
    &
    Groom

    get married on Saturday, the twenty fourth day of July
    two thousand and ten
    at two o'clock in the afternoon

     
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    FutureGulick    October 9, 2010   Dallas, TX

    I'm using that quote on the inside flap of my envelopes so that's always an option.  It's something I know people will see but still unexpected. 

    @future mrs martin:  love the idea of incorporating the "fairy tale" wording into the body of the invite. great idea!

     

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