Need feedback on non-traditional ceremony script please :)

posted 3 years ago in Ceremony
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  • Post # 5
    730 posts
    Busy bee
    • Wedding: August 2014 - South Bonson Pier & Community Centre

    @2BeeWed2013:  I like the line “until the end of our forever”. I personally like it when the bride and groom each say some slightly differnt vows to one another, but in the repeat-after-me form, this probably works best.

    Post # 6
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    Sugar bee
    • Wedding: May 2015

    I really like this! It includes some beautiful reminders of how marriage must be, and how it sometimes will take work. 🙂

    The only thing I wondered about was the way the vows end with “our forever.” Those two words niggle at me a little, despite how beautiful they sound, because I feel like they could be interpreted a lot of different ways, some good, some not so good. But I imagine you have strong feelings on that sort of thing which is why you wrote it that way. 🙂

    Post # 9
    351 posts
    Helper bee
    • Wedding: August 2013

    Looks good!

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