need help…

posted 3 years ago in Paper
  • poll: which invitation for an outdoor garden affair?
    left side : (10 votes)
    32 %
    right side : (21 votes)
    68 %
  • Post # 3
    1790 posts
    Buzzing bee
    • Wedding: November 2014

    I like the second one better (the one on the right).  The pink one with the birds looks…cheesy for lack of a better word. I love the fun wording on the invitation, and the one on the right seems to continue the “fun” theme. 

    Post # 4
    10748 posts
    Sugar Beekeeper
    • Wedding: February 2014

    The one on the right is simple, clean and cute. I don’t like the one on the left.

    Post # 5
    393 posts
    Helper bee
    • Wedding: October 2013

    Right side.  You should consider changing the wording.

     Instead of “dirty jokes”, just put “jokes”. I don’t think “dirty jokes” belongs on ANY wedding invitation. It’s your wedding so if it makes you happy I guess, but it makes me cringe. The invitaiton is so cute and lighthearted otherwise, I think it ruins it. 

    Also, “Garden Wedding Attire” is sufficient. Including “(No Jeans or Heels)” is completely unnecessary. I’m not sure about the use of “Garden Wedding Attire” itself, but definitely exclude the “No Jeans or Heels” bit. 


    Post # 7
    715 posts
    Busy bee

    @MrsPocahontas:  I definitly vote right. 

    To make it look more like a wedding invitation maybe include little hearts in the banner on top? A heart-garland may convey more of a wedding theme, won’t it?

    Or maybe make the birds with the heart a little bit bigger? 

    Post # 8
    901 posts
    Busy bee
    • Wedding: July 2013

    Some girls (like me) will always turn up in heels to a wedding. I went to a fab outdoors-y wedding a couple of months ago and carefully picked out a pair of chunky wedges so that I wouldn’t sink into the grass/mud 🙂 The “garden wedding attire” is plenty, although I wouldn’t mention clothing at all on the invitation.

    Post # 9
    1157 posts
    Bumble bee
    • Wedding: April 2014

    At first I was going to say the right side because it was clean and simple but it is kinda typical (in my books). I hate flowers and birds but I love the way the untraditional wordings play off of the cheesy, traditional invite. I love it. I had to smile.

    Post # 10
    8389 posts
    Bumble Beekeeper
    • Wedding: April 2013

    @tiff-tiff-tiff:  +1, I love the humor of this invite as a whole.

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