(Closed) Need help with my DIY invitations, pretty please :)

posted 6 years ago in DIY
Post # 3
341 posts
Helper bee

I think it needs some color, maybe do your names in red or one of your colors? Also, make sure to spell check before you print it, I found several spelling mistakes in a quick glance, otherwise I like it.

Post # 5
4887 posts
Honey bee
  • Wedding: May 2012

I like the idea, but I have to admit it’s got a LOT going on and is very difficult to read.  Would you consider another font?


Spell check is needed for sure – Spectacular and Eternal are not spelled correctly.  

Post # 6
1691 posts
Bumble bee
  • Wedding: December 2012

what if you put nuptial spectactular on top of each other? like each on their own line centred?

Post # 9
233 posts
Helper bee
  • Wedding: February 2012

I love the old fashioned circus type announcement.  πŸ™‚

Be Witness is very hard to read in that font… I have trouble reading some of the other words as well (same font).

I think your names should be larger, while love eternal and tie the knot are a little less attention grabbing (I also think those two phrases should be in the same font while your names are distinct somehow.)

I know it’s supposed to be somewhat hectic, but try to limit to 3 different fonts.  Perhaps instead using so many fonts use more lower case vs upper case.

Post # 11
3000 posts
Sugar bee
  • Wedding: July 2012

First, I like this invite and how unique it is! One suggestion, going off a comment of a PP is that there is a lot going on so you might want to remove a little bit to make it easier to read. Perhaps take out the lines beneath your names “in her death defying act as bride” (sounds a tiny bit morbid in my opinion even thought it totally goes with the theme) and “as groom – the role of a lifetime.” I think it will make your names stand out more and after all, you two are the most important part of the invite πŸ™‚

Post # 12
344 posts
Helper bee
  • Wedding: September 2012

Great invite – thank you for posting!  Like a PP mentioned, I think I would work with your names a bit – make them larger and try a version with the same font for both of your names. Also work with the spacing between letters in yours names – they look a bit crowded to me.  Can’t wait to see your next draft – please share!

Post # 13
4150 posts
Honey bee
  • Wedding: November 1999

@Mrs. Fireworks:  I agree with this and thought the same thing when I read it.  I don’t love the word “death” on a wedding invitation.  But the invitation as a whole is VERY cute – I love the theme of it!

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