(Closed) Need Invite Wording Help

posted 7 years ago in Paper
Post # 3
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143 posts
Blushing bee

Something about “invite you to show your love and support” seems a bit off to me, but I can’t quite put my finger on it.

How about “joyfully request the pleasure of your company as they celebrate their love and unite in marriage”?

Post # 4
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1403 posts
Bumble bee
  • Wedding: August 2010

You could just shorten the first line to “invite you to show your support by joining them.”

Is there something else about that line that bugs you?

Post # 5
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1403 posts
Bumble bee
  • Wedding: August 2010

Actually I just thought of something, if it helps with the brainstorming…

“request your presence, support, and well wishes”

“as they pledge their eternal love through marriage”

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