Post # 1
This is my first post!
ok, Im stuck now and i think my wording could be better Any advice would be great!
Today, my dreams come true. Today I marry the love of my life.
I fell in love with you at 15 when I didn’t even know what love really was.
Now 7 years later we have grown up together and have the most amazing baby girl.
I feel so blessed to call you my husband and the loving father of our daughter.
Today I promise to always push you toward your dreams
To be a best friend, loving wife, and caring mother to our children.
I promise to always be honest and faithful to you
I promise to laugh with you and at you when necessary
Post # 3
I think those vows are beautiful! They end a little abruptly though. Maybe add a line or 2 that sums things up?
I admire anyone that has the guts to write their own vows. I’m definitely going the “repeat after me” route with mine!
Post # 4
Those are lovely, simple vows.
I agree with the PP though, you should maybe try to end it with a bit more of a flourish. Maybe something like “And finally, I promise to love you forever, no matter what comes our way”.
Post # 5
Thank you for the advice! I had wanted to put somthing to finish it off and I really like you idea..I think I need 2-3 more lines to finish it off just not sure what to put?
Post # 6
@junebabymia: How about ending it this way.
I will look with joy down the path of our tomorrow’s
knowing we will walk it together side by side,
hand in hand and heart to heart.
These things I promise to you today, and all the days of our life.