(Closed) New Bee and need help with vows!

posted 6 years ago in Ceremony
Post # 3
1093 posts
Bumble bee
  • Wedding: September 2012

I think those vows are beautiful! They end a little abruptly though. Maybe add a line or 2 that sums things up?

I admire anyone that has the guts to write their own vows. I’m definitely going the “repeat after me” route with mine! 

Post # 4
5657 posts
Bee Keeper
  • Wedding: February 2012

Those are lovely, simple vows.

I agree with the PP though, you should maybe try to end it with a bit more of a flourish. Maybe something like “And finally, I promise to love you forever, no matter what comes our way”.

Post # 6
315 posts
Helper bee
  • Wedding: June 1997

@junebabymia:  How about ending it this way.

I will look with joy down the path of our tomorrow’s
knowing we will walk it together side by side,
hand in hand and heart to heart.

These things I promise to you today, and all the days of our life.

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