Opinions on DIY invitation design

posted 3 years ago in Paper
  • poll: Which design would you choose? If you choose none, what would you change?
    A : (0 votes)
    B : (2 votes)
    6 %
    C : (0 votes)
    D : (7 votes)
    21 %
    E : (3 votes)
    9 %
    F : (1 votes)
    3 %
    G : (0 votes)
    H : (2 votes)
    6 %
    NONE : (18 votes)
    55 %
  • Post # 2
    2474 posts
    Buzzing bee
    • Wedding: September 2012

    I picked D. Less is more. Also, I would straighten the “Together with their parents” – it looks weird that that may possibly be the only text curving at all. I would actually make it smaller, and make it straight. 

    Post # 3
    453 posts
    Helper bee
    • Wedding: November 2014

    I do like the scroll smaller than your original design in the other thread. I’m not feeling the dots on any of them, so I’m restraining to separate them though. I almost think it would look cleaner with out them if you are having the scroll on the left. It seems like it needs some other color or something to balance it on the right side.  My vote is none. I know you are working hard at this. You will get there. 

    Post # 4
    1154 posts
    Bumble bee
    • Wedding: January 2015

    I also like D, but I agree to remove the curve in “together with their parents” 

    Post # 5
    657 posts
    Busy bee
    • Wedding: May 2013

    you never corrected the grammar errors, together with their parents and then our, just doesn’t work. I would fix this.

    Post # 6
    759 posts
    Busy bee
    • Wedding: June 2014

    alleycat1984:  Yes she did. It says “together with our parents”. Everything’s in the first person.

    Post # 7
    657 posts
    Busy bee
    • Wedding: May 2013

    omg im too tired, i just remember it was an issue before and thought it said their. I do like your invite a lot more now.

    Post # 8
    10834 posts
    Sugar Beekeeper
    • Wedding: June 2011

    ecrowe1218: I voted E, I like the date format and although it’s similar to A the unbolded text at the bottom compared to A, which is, E is softer looking as a result.

    Post # 12
    108 posts
    Blushing bee
    • Wedding: September 2014

    I think there’s way too many fonts and graphics. I don’t even know what to look at first. There’s just so much going on with the writing that it’s a bit jarring. There’s curves, dots, numbers, bold text, cursive text, etc. I would streamline it a bit.  

    Post # 14
    160 posts
    Blushing bee
    • Wedding: April 2014

    ecrowe1218:  I picked B, but only because of the layout of the date and time. It really bothers me that some words are completely CAPITALIZED while OTHERS ARE not.

    Post # 15
    442 posts
    Helper bee
    • Wedding: December 2013

    I would take off the swirl thing, straighten and center everything, and get rid of at least one font. I understand what you’re going for with the mixed font thing in the middle of a sentence but these two fonts don’t work well together. 

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