Our Save the Date proofs are in! Is something off?

posted 3 years ago in Paper
Post # 2
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Honey bee

We’re date twins!

And I think they look good, although I don’t really care for any of the fonts….cute pictures though 🙂

Post # 3
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Bee Keeper
  • Wedding: October 2010

Marlisle016:  I dont like any of the fonts. The one on the fence needs to be nudged a little bit so the bottom of the letters follow the bottom of th fence. The rails are on a slight diagonal, but the lettering looks straight. Needs to look like someone wrote on the fence. 

Post # 4
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Buzzing bee
  • Wedding: June 2015

since you already have the date on the other photo, i would simply remove the font from the fence. and i’d pick a pure white font on the ‘centrefold’ rather than a bordered, script one. it’s very busy against the background of the trees. cute photos!

Post # 5
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Sugar bee
  • Wedding: January 2015

peonyinlove:  +1 I agree with all of that.

I think the pictures are cute, but don’t care for any of the fonts.

Post # 6
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Blushing bee
  • Wedding: August 2015

The pictures are pretty! I just think that the ring picture in the first one didn’t match well with the fence picture. Maybe do something different there?

Post # 7
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Busy bee
  • Wedding: May 2015

Marlisle016:  As a Graphic Designer, the fonts don’t match at all. The front is very teacher’s bulletin board and the inside is way too scirpty and hard to read especially with the busy trees/leaved backgound. 

A few suggestions… The ring picture for the back rather than fading it out becasue it’s they back why not just make it smaller, like a logo so you can still see the ring it’s just not so big. Then on the inside I would say have all of the text put to the right of you guys and not on the top. It feels disconnected to just randomly have the location on the bottom. I thought at first you were trying to have it so someone could frame the inside photo if they liked so there’s no words or text.

The pictures are beautiful!! Hopefull you’ll be able to come to a design that compliments them more than distracts.

 

Post # 9
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Busy bee
  • Wedding: May 2015

Marlisle016:  a millions times better!! The fonts all match, are cohesive and are much easier to read!! I also agree 100% on having the deisgner move the Save the date on the fence down so it’s on the center three rungs.

Post # 11
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Busy bee
  • Wedding: May 2015

Marlisle016:  You’re welcome, so glad I could help!

Post # 12
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Bee Keeper
  • Wedding: October 2010

Marlisle016:  So much better! And I think it is capturing the feel you want–good job!

Post # 13
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Bumble bee
  • Wedding: August 2014

Wow, soooooo much better!

Post # 15
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Sugar Beekeeper
  • Wedding: May 2014

version 2 is so much better!!

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