(Closed) Our wishing well poem. Thoughts?

posted 8 years ago in Gifts and Registries
Post # 3
Member
139 posts
Blushing bee
  • Wedding: May 2010

Your line breaks are off. It should be:

The tradition of a wishing well used on the wedding day

is here both for your gifts and for what you’d like to say.

 So please drop in a token of love for this special Bride & Groom

as today they join their lives together and promise their love will always bloom.

 

Or if you want it to be two four-line stanzas, then:

The tradition of a wishing well

used on the wedding day

is here both for your gifts

and for what you’d like to say.

 

So please drop in a token of love

for this special Bride & Groom

as today they join their lives together

and promise their love will always bloom.

Post # 4
Member
474 posts
Helper bee
  • Wedding: May 2010

I like polkadot’s edit. Its a way cute poem. I think how she has it works better.

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