(Closed) please critique my DIY StD!

posted 4 years ago in DIY
  • poll: Which 'Save the Date' word alignment do you like best?
    'the' left justified : (3 votes)
    9 %
    'the' right justified : (8 votes)
    23 %
    'save the date' all in one line : (22 votes)
    63 %
    something else that I will suggest on the thread : (2 votes)
    6 %
  • Post # 3
    Member
    33 posts
    Newbee
    • Wedding: November 2013

    love it! the picture is perfect? maybe make the “save the date” part alittle darker in the same colors, unless the picture you posted shows is differently.

    Post # 4
    Member
    1925 posts
    Buzzing bee
    • Wedding: May 2013

    I LOVE IT!  I agree with the PP, make the “Save the Date” a little darker… but otherwise, very modern and romantic and chic 🙂

    Post # 5
    Member
    5068 posts
    Bee Keeper
    • Wedding: April 2014

    I agree with pp, the STD writing needs to be darker as its very pale. The picture you’ve used is gorgeous though. So lovely. 

    Post # 6
    Member
    714 posts
    Busy bee

    I like it

    I agree I would do the “Save the Date” a little bit darker & 

    the other text less dark… The black is too hard in my opinon. I’d go with a dark blue, dark green or whatever fits your color scheme.

    Post # 7
    Member
    2615 posts
    Sugar bee
    • Wedding: September 2014

    Is it wrong that every single time I see STD on this site I think of sexually transmitted diseases? It makes me batty.

    As for this particular STD, I think it’s a very cute photo. Nothing wrong with it.

    Post # 8
    Member
    446 posts
    Helper bee
    • Wedding: September 2013

    I really like it but I read it as “the save date” rather than “save the date”. Hm.

    Post # 9
    Member
    765 posts
    Busy bee
    • Wedding: September 2014

    @MsW-to-MrsM:  LOL. Me too! 

    To OP, I like it! Agree with PPs. Make the “Save the Date” section a little darker, so it’s easier to read. I’d also suggest moving “the.” It does look like it says “the Save Date.”   

     

    Post # 11
    Member
    1101 posts
    Bumble bee
    • Wedding: June 2014

    @Skittles131:  Date Twins!

    I also read it as “the save date” b/c of the design with the “the” on the left.  Not a big deal and I’m sure people will get it/reread it correctly.  But I would be curious to see the “the” on the right (same type of format and in the same place).

    It looks great.

    Post # 12
    Member
    33 posts
    Newbee
    • Wedding: November 2013

    @Skittles131:  the color is better 🙂 maybe you could put the “the” a little behind the “save date” and put more space between the two? just a thought. the lighter font of the “the” would stand out behind the pink

    Post # 13
    Member
    721 posts
    Busy bee
    • Wedding: August 2014 - South Bonson Pier & Community Centre

    I would space out the save the date part – making the “the” behind the other two words and more like:

     

    save – the – date

    versus

    save

    the

    date

     

    I hope that makes sense.

    or maybe right align the who thing?

     

    LOVE THE PHOTO!! fricken gorgeous!

     

    Post # 14
    Hostess
    11864 posts
    Sugar Beekeeper
    • Wedding: May 2014

    It’s really cute but to be perfectly honest, at first glace, every time i see it, it reminds me of a teen romance novel…i’m not sure why and i’m not sure if it’s bad thing but I had to put it out there…

    Post # 16
    Member
    260 posts
    Helper bee
    • Wedding: January 2014

    I like the “save the date” all in one line. Sorry for just jumping in! Hope that’s okay.

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