Please critique this rehearsal invitation

posted 3 years ago in Paper
Post # 2
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Newbee
  • Wedding: October 2015

I think it looks wonderful!

Post # 3
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Bumble bee

Replace “an” with “a” in the first line.

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Worker bee
  • Wedding: December 2014 - lindsay lakes, cypress TX

I Love the lights at the top and the chalk board look – pretty! I would change ‘in honor of future mr & Mrs..” to “in honor of THE future mr. & Mrs…” sounds better, grammatically, to me. 

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Worker bee
  • Wedding: December 2014 - lindsay lakes, cypress TX

I also agree with pp, ‘an’ needs to be ‘a’ – again, just a silly grammar thing! 

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Blushing bee
  • Wedding: December 2014

Very professional looking!

Post # 7
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Blushing bee
  • Wedding: October 2014

Very cute! “Mr” and “Mrs” each need periods after them, if you’re using American English, because they’re abbreviations. “Mr. and Mrs.”  

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