(Closed) Please help me with wording on a couple of my reception signs!

posted 5 years ago in Reception
  • poll: How is my wording??
    Both are good, don't change them. : (0 votes)
    #1 is good but # 2 needs changing. Please explain. : (1 votes)
    13 %
    # 2 is good but # 1 needs changing. Please explain. : (4 votes)
    50 %
    Both need changing. Please explain. : (3 votes)
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  • Post # 3
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    Buzzing bee
    • Wedding: May 2014

    For the first sign, I would remove the quotes and substitute “margins” instead of “white part”. I would also put a period at the end of the request because “Enjoy your evening” is a separate sentence. End it with a period or exclamation point. 

    Post # 6
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    52 posts
    Worker bee
    • Wedding: September 2012

    Really, I don’t think having a sign and activity books/glow-in-the dark things is really necessary for adults. Why would adults want a kids activity book? Am I missing something?

    Post # 7
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    2073 posts
    Buzzing bee
    • Wedding: July 2012

    We did the same type of guest book and didn’t have a sign.  Our guests figured it our when they saw the pens on the table.  I’d ditch the sign.  As far as the activity book/goodie bags, why not just put a few of them on each table and then place the goodie bags for the kids on their chairs (if you’re doing assigned seating).  People will figure it out.

    Post # 8
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    65 posts
    Worker bee
    • Wedding: December 2013

    I’d say white matting instead of white part.

    And for the second sign, I’d just have two signs with the goodies in two baskets ” For the kids…” and “For the adults…”

    Post # 9
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    Sugar bee

    Can you have the kids bags already set out at the children’s place at the table.

     

    I also don’t think you need to tell people how to sign the guest book.  Unless you are inviting a lot of dummies people will know to sign on the white matting around the frame.

    Post # 12
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    1769 posts
    Buzzing bee
    • Wedding: June 2014

    I think the best way to get people to sign your guest book/photo mat/etc is have the bridal party do it first so everyone gets what they’re supposed to do. Plus, the signed photo mat thing is really popular – people will certainly know what to do when they see one.

     

    For the activity books, I like the PP suggest of “for the kids” and “for the adults”…or maybe “for the young” and “for the young at heart” just so it’s more playful.

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