Please help with baby shower invite wording, ASAP!

posted 4 years ago in Gifts and Registries
Post # 4
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Sugar Beekeeper
  • Wedding: May 2013

That is SO CUTE! Love it!

Post # 5
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Honey Beekeeper
  • Wedding: November 1999

I would delete and her son Bryce Allen  if the shower is being held before the baby is born.

Post # 6
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Buzzing bee
  • Wedding: August 2010

@MmeSilverBullet:  I don’t love the part that says “Join us in showering ____ with a baby shower”. The showering with a shower part is just throwing me off a little!

Post # 7
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Sugar Beekeeper
  • Wedding: May 2009

I would make just a few, minor tweaks:

* Put an exclamation point after “here”

* Put “son” and “Bryce Allen” on separate lines

* The date should be July 14 instead of July 14th

* The time should read “1 p.m.” instead of “1:00 P.M.”

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