Post # 1
Hello ladies, Below is the wording of our invite. Do you think there is too many “together?” Do you think the covenant of marriage sounds correct or any other suggestions? Someone previously suggested “in Holy Matrimony” but I don’t want it to sound super religious. Your help is greatly appreciated!!
TOGETHER WITH THEIR PARENTS
INVITE YOU TO SHARE THE BEGINNING
OF THEIR NEW LIFE TOGETHER
WHEN THEY EXCHANGE VOWS AND ARE UNITED
IN THE COVENANT OF MARRIAGE
Post # 3
@Asia_Leone:I think you can drop the second “together” and it still make sense.
Post # 5
I like TOGETHER WITH THEIR PARENTS, and drop the second TOGETHER. Also UNIT needs to be UNITE.