(Closed) Please proofread rsvp and enclosure again made some changes…

posted 6 years ago in Paper
Post # 3
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Sugar bee
  • Wedding: May 2011

I would eliminate the (s) on Declines, with regrets. It should read:

Accepts with pleasure

Declines with regret

 

That’s the only thing I found! 🙂

Post # 4
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Helper bee
  • Wedding: July 2012

I would suggest not putting the hotel info on there. If you specify your wedding website on your invitation, your guests can log on and get all the information including hotel accommodations, must-do/must-see/must-eat while in the area, venue information (directions/map), weather network, full event itinerary, dress code, gift registry, etc.

Again, it depends on the look and feel (of the invitations) that you’re going for. We have formal invitations and this helped make them look more streamlined and not busy, cluttered or overwhelming.

Post # 6
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Bumble Beekeeper
  • Wedding: March 2012 - Pelican Grand Beach Resort

Since these are enclosure cards, keep the hotel info. It will be very useful to the non-internet uses among your friends and family.

Remove the commas and the plurals from the RSVP card as PP said.

Are there only two lines? Do you have any invitations for more than 2 people? Are you accidentally opening yourself up to have people invited alone think they can add a guest because there are two lines there?

Post # 7
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Sugar bee
  • Wedding: March 2012

As PPs said, remove the commas. Definitely keep the hotel info on the enclosure cards.

Everything else sounds fine. 🙂

Post # 9
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Honey bee
  • Wedding: August 2013

@August252012:  Is it possible to create RSVP cards with a few more lines for the larger groups, and just one line for anyone who is single and not allowed a guest?

Post # 11
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Bumble Beekeeper
  • Wedding: July 2013 - UK

I think I posted on your other thread before… it is accommodation, not accommodations. Accommodation is a noun, and is both singular and plural. Accommodations is a verb, which describes the act of accommodating. So, for example, if you want to describe the accommodations you are making for your guests, that would include things like the transport which you are providing for them, the gift baskets which you are giving to them, special help for handicapped guests etc etc

If, on the other hand, you only want to describe the place where they might be staying, you want the plural noun: accommodation.

Post # 12
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Bumble bee
  • Wedding: September 2011

To solve this problem, I used this sort of format:

 

M_________________________________

___ accepts with pleasure
___ declines with regret

Please indicate your entree selections:

___ Chicken
___ Fish
___ Beef

Kindly respond by xxxxxxxxx.

Post # 15
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Bumble bee
  • Wedding: June 2014 - Cedar Lake Cellars

If you leave the addresses, I would either abbreviate both Street and Boulevard or neither.  My eyes don’t like the mismatch.  Otherwise, it looks good to me.

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