(Closed) Proof my invite wording please! :)

posted 5 years ago in Paper
Post # 3
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Newbee
  • Wedding: April 2013

Looks good to me! The wording sounds nice.

Post # 4
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Worker bee
  • Wedding: October 2012

The year should be written:

TWO THOUSAND TWELVE

rather than “two thousand and twelve.”

Other than that it looks good!  If you feel it is too wordy you could try:

INVITE YOU TO SHARE IN CELEBRATING THE MARRIAGE OF THEIR CHILDREN


It’s only 2 words but I think it makes a difference!

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