- 5 years ago
- Wedding: October 2012
Here is what I have so far.. I just want to make sure I’m not missing anything.
Can you think of a better intro than what I have below? It seems like it’s too wordy right now (“Invite you to share in the celebration of the marriage of their children”). However, I do not want to use the “request the presence…” wording.
MR. AND MRS. JIM AND JANE SMITH
MR. AND MRS. BILL AND BARB JOHNSON
INVITE YOU TO SHARE IN THE CELEBRATION OF THE MARRIAGE OF THEIR CHILDREN (??)
SATURDAY, THE SIXTH OF OCTOBER
TWO THOUSAND AND TWELVE
AT TWO O’CLOCK IN THE AFTERNOON
RECEPTION TO FOLLOW