(Closed) Proof my menu please :)

posted 5 years ago in Food
Post # 3
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Bumble bee
  • Wedding: June 2013

Salads are usually first course. . . and not sure what purpose “french served” serves on the menu. 

Post # 4
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Helper bee
  • Wedding: April 2012

I’m assuming people get beef or chicken. it reads as if they get both. I would just say entree and then describe the beef put “or” the describe the chicken.

Post # 6
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Sugar bee
  • Wedding: March 1996

I had to look up what “french served” means — and I’m still not sure. I don’t know if you need to have it on the menu anyway.

I don’t know if the final menu will be larger, but I find that font really difficult to read at the size it’s at.

Post # 7
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Bumble bee
  • Wedding: June 2013

1. When I read this I thought “what is blush sauce?” and then “what is french served?” I could guess the former, but had to look up the latter.

2. They’re serving the chicken after the beef? That’s kinda odd in my experience.

3. It’s not entree and second entree; It’s second course and third course

4.  I think the typefaces should be switched around. Use the script (which is hard to read) for the titles and the serif for the food.

Post # 8
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Busy bee
  • Wedding: August 2014 - South Bonson Pier & Community Centre

I find it really difficult to read.

French served (family style?) can probably be removed.

If it were me, I would say ‘First Plate’, ‘Second Plate’, and ‘Entree’. Not sure about ‘Second Entree’?

 

@geekspice:  +1   (but the OCD in me wants to mention that it’s a ‘sans-serif’ font)

Post # 9
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Sugar bee
  • Wedding: April 2013

With that font it is VERY hard to read

Post # 10
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Sugar bee
  • Wedding: April 2013

Also I think the part that reads “coffee, tea, espresso” is weird, since espresso is coffee.

Post # 11
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Busy bee
  • Wedding: August 2014 - South Bonson Pier & Community Centre

@bebero:  I don’t agree with that. If it was just “coffee & tea” then I wouldn’t know that I had the option to order an espresso. I would think that it was just percolated coffee and tea.

Post # 13
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Bumble bee
  • Wedding: June 2013

Yes, I think this is much better.

Post # 14
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Busy bee
  • Wedding: November 1999

t@m7878:  Personally, I’d have everything written like the first and third course with conjunctions or just list items like in the second where you don’t use ‘and’ or ‘with.’ Flows better, IMO!

Post # 15
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Sugar bee
  • Wedding: April 2013

much easier to read!

Post # 16
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Sugar bee
  • Wedding: March 1996

So much better!

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