(Closed) Proofread my invites, pretty please?

posted 6 years ago in Paper
Post # 3
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Buzzing bee

@indibee: I am not an English teacher but I will do my best to help:0) 

A block of rooms has been reserved under….I think it should be A block of rooms have been reserved

and the Alternative Suits 555.555.5555….I think it should be suite

Barbequed Pot Roast….. I think it should be Barbeque

 

 

Post # 4
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Bee Keeper

Is there a reason Mr & Mrs. ND’s names are first? Usually it’s the parents of the bride listed first followed by the groom’s.

The block of rooms HAS is correct, and I think the barbequed is fine (if that’s the way it is listed on the menu).

I also don’t think you need to write half past four O’CLOCK and AFTERNOON. Half past four in the afternoon is fine. I believe the year is also written without the and …two thousand twelve

Post # 7
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Bee Keeper

HaHa..it happens. I’m convinced everyone becomes blind at some point and everything always starts to look right!

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