(Closed) Reception Card Wording.. Does this sound cheesy?

posted 8 years ago in Paper
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Helper bee
  • Wedding: June 2010

I think it sounds fine—though I might whittle the first line down even more to something like this:

Please join us to celebrate with cocktails, dinner, and dancing after the ceremony.

You could also cut down or combine the second two lines if you wanted to, though I don’t know that you need to:

The ceremony will be held outside except in case of rain.

(Do they need to know to look for you on the lawn or in the reception hall, or will this be clear once they arrive at the venue? If it won’t be clear, definitely include the info as you did—if it’s going to be self-explanatory, you don’t necessarily need to tell them anything beyond that it will be outside unless it rains.)

 

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