Rejected for Blog.. Anyone willing to take a look and give tips?

posted 3 years ago in Weddingbee
Post # 3
965 posts
Busy bee
  • Wedding: January 2014

@EllEmm005:  Can you post a link? Or is on your profile?

Post # 4
6953 posts
Busy Beekeeper
  • Wedding: October 2015

@EllEmm005:  I’d be happy to. I’m a long-time blog reader who is super picky about content and grammer, so I might be able to help. PM me!

Post # 6
104 posts
Blushing bee
  • Wedding: May 2014 - St. Francis of Assisi Church & N.O. Board of Trade

Send it to me too, I’d be happy to take a look!

Post # 7
319 posts
Helper bee
  • Wedding: June 2015

you can blog anywhere on the internet- try or

Post # 8
6953 posts
Busy Beekeeper
  • Wedding: October 2015

@EllEmm005:  Does the Bee give you any feedback or do they just say “no thanks”? Cause from a quick scan, it looks really good and I’m wondering if maybe it’s just that they already have someone blogging a similar style wedding right now. 

Post # 9
863 posts
Busy bee
  • Wedding: October 2014

@EllEmm005:  I read the bee blog a lot and I’d love to help and give you feedback if I can. 

Post # 11
1258 posts
Bumble bee

I would be happy to look it over as well, if you need another pair of eyes! 🙂

I read the blogger bees pretty religiously and definitely have my favourites based on their personality that comes across in their writing. I find that’s one of the most important, and also difficult, things. Finding your ‘voice’ when it comes to writing. 

Post # 12
6953 posts
Busy Beekeeper
  • Wedding: October 2015

@EllEmm005:  You’re posting every few days, which seems good. Your writing is great. The only thing I would suggest is maybe more photos and a higher quality camera. I think a lot of your pics are probably cell phone ones, but they are kinda dark & not eye-catching for that reason. Also, on the STD post I would have posted more step-by-step pics. Even if it’s not a full tutorial, it’s nice to get a better idea of how something was put together. 

Post # 13
1359 posts
Bumble bee
  • Wedding: June 2013

I’d also be happy to read it if you pm the link to me.

Post # 15
1258 posts
Bumble bee

I said I’d pm you some suggestions, but I think it might be more helpful to put them up on this thread, so that other bees who have looked at your blog link, can confirm or deny. So to speak. 🙂

The frequency is good – a quick scan of the posts shows you cover a lot of categories of planning which is great! I know you haven’t exhausted your arsenal of ideas for blog posts yet, but a suggestion might be to include a post about the actual proposal or some brief history of your relationship so readers can see how you came to ‘bee’! Hah- sorry I had to. Wink

DJ/Music posts – I would maybe allude to the budget. Not that’s it’s anyone’s business, but I find that if you are appealing to a larger audience, a lot of bees (like myself) might be sold more on price then another factor. Or if you are more comfortable, you could give a range of prices you have seen in your location. 

Ex. college age bands might perform for an average of >$500 in the Baltimore area…but a dj might only be $600-900 (again, just looking for average pricepoints).

I like your STD post – because I can totally relate to the perfectionist attitude with the side of just not giving a crap anymore! I think as a PP mentioned, higher quality pictures would be more helpful & zooming in for the reveal of the STD packages with ribbons. More of these kinds of posts are great. The reasons behind why you chose to do a diy or choosing your colours or theme.

The emotional post was very well-written. I feel like that’s something that more bloggers need to jump on. It helps round out the person that you are, the person you are marrying and the personality and viewpoints you hold. 🙂 Kudos on the writing, but also on dealing through the hard stuff. 

As a general note, might be to add some references into your posts, the ceremony ones were quite wordy – maybe a couple more jokes, or some witty one liners. Even a historical or pop culture reference or two, it helps break up the posts into chunks of info vs. a dialogue of your planning.

Ex. any famous or infamous Jewish-Catholic marriages in history that you have come across while researching interfaith ceremonies? (This is really specific, but just an idea to add into the mix.)

You are very good at breaking down the thought process or what makes you and the Mr. choose one thing over the other.  The ones about the interfaith ceremony and officiants are very informative. But maybe breaking it up a bit with of a description of the types of officiants you were looking for – for example I had no idea what a cantor was even though I understood it was a part of the Jewish faith. I got the gist of it, but it wasn’t totally clear. 

This is very much relevant to you and your FI’s faiths, but maybe more of a bridge into what you both believe in and more posts about how you two co-exist and balance out each other’s faiths. 

The titles could be a bit more catchy – part 1, part 2 and part 3, make it seem more of a saga and less like blog posts. I think it’s okay to do a 1 and 2, but if it gets to 3, maybe come up with a catchier name or even try a song lyric or something to to describe what the post is about? It’s great to categorize them though, like you’ve been doing. The whole blog reads cohesively, much like a story in order or what happened next. Which is nice. 

I think you’re doing a really great job so far. I hope some of my suggestions and examples made sense. I tried to be constructive, so please don’t take offense, as these are totally just suggestions that I hope might help you become a blogging bee! 🙂 




Post # 16
85 posts
Worker bee
  • Wedding: April 2014 - The Grand Hotel, Cape May, NJ

@EllEmm005:  I’d love to take a look and offer some feedback if you PM the link to me!

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