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I would probably go with option 1 and use the first wording ... the question really sets it up!
I think I like #1 the best, though maybe there are some alternatives you haven't thought of yet? I like the "ready to celebrate" line better cause what if they can't come? I guess they *could* celebrate from far away, lol!
@KMsull - this is the list we narrowed down from 10 different wordings!
I like #1 and #3. 1 is good but I don't like "date's taken" for some reason - you could say "sorry, can't make it" for the decline answer.
I know what you mean, I never wanted to spend this much time on the little things but you can't help it! I have tried not to think too much about how to word things, but of course I have. :)
I voted #1 "Ready to celebrate" I like it because for some reason the "can't" in the second wording sounds slightly negative. I like the first one because it's all uplifting and positive. weird I know. After taking "mental health" for nursing school I've been paying attention to the wording of things.
I voted for #1 with the "Ready to Celebrate" wording. Very cool idea.
Can't Wait to Celebrate.
But I really like the check box options from #3. I wanted to play mix and match with your response cards, hehe.
I like the first one and the first wording...it's a most different of all without being out there
I was just wondering how your wording was coming along!
How about a combo of 1 & 3?
Ready to celebrate?
Please respond by January 24, 2010Name(s)____________________
____ wouldn’t miss it!
____ sorry, can’t make it
I (we) promise to dance if you add this song to the playlist:______________________________________
Good luck!
I agree with the people who said they don't like 'the date is taken.' To be honest, we spend too much time on this stuff. Once people get the resopnse card, what they see is what they get. So, make a decision and be confident people will love it! It's good that you asked us, becuse other people...regardless if they are BM or others, really don't want to hear about 'the wedding'. I'm more in line with eestationery. This is such a cute idea!
So my answer would be:
Ready to Celebrate with us?
Please respond by xxx.
Name [s]
email address;
___The date is circled!
Will promise to dance if you play _________________
___Can't believe we can't make it.
Thanks for all the advice! I tweaked things around and I think I'm going with this:
Ready to celebrate?
Let us know by: January 24, 2010
(Either pop this in the mail or call 505-555-5555)
Name(s)____________________
O wouldn’t miss it!
number attending ___________
O sorry, missing out
We promise to dance if you add this song to the playlist:
______________________________________
we had the accepts with pleasure and declines with regrets and one of my friends added her own checkbox that said accepts with regretful pleasure. We also received one back with no name of who was attending but just a drawing of a shark fin in water. actually we received several back with no name of who was attending written in, just an accepts with pleasure. we managed to track everyone down though.
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My FI and I are having a hard time deciding which response card wording to pick. We want something somewhat fun and a little different. If you pick #1, which first line do you like the most?
It's crazy how these little details consume your time!
1.
Ready to celebrate? OR Can’t wait to celebrate!
Let us know by: January 24, 2010
Name(s)____________________
___ The date's circled on our calendar!
___ Sorry, the date's taken.
We promise to dance if you add this song to the playlist:
______________________________________
2.
We can’t way to celebrate with you.
Can you make it? Let us know by
January 24, 2010
Name(s) ________________________________
____ accepts with pleasure
____ declines with regret
We promise to dance if you add this song to the playlist:
______________________________________
3.
Can’t wait to see you there!
Please respond by January 24, 2010
Name ________________________________
____ wouldn’t miss it!
____ can’t make it
We promise to dance if you add this song to the playlist:
______________________________________