Review my Invite, please!

posted 3 years ago in Paper
Post # 2
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Bumble bee
  • Wedding: August 2015

I would move the info about your parents above you names.  Other than that, I think it looks good!

Post # 3
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Honey bee
  • Wedding: January 2013 - Harbourfront Grand Hall

Ayybety:  Looks great!  My only suggestion would be to possibly use “and” instead of “&” between Jesus and Teresa.  Leave the “&” for you and your FH.

Post # 4
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Busy Beekeeper
  • Wedding: August 2012

It would make more sense IMO to have your parent’s names above yours, but otherwise I think it looks good.

Post # 5
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Busy bee
  • Wedding: May 2014 - Smithfield Center

Did you scan this onto the computer or is this the actual document? I agree with the PP’s about the info of parent names and also the ‘&’ being reserved for you and your FH. But I want to add that the entire wording of the invite looks skewed, like it’s tilting to the left slightly.

Post # 6
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Busy bee
  • Wedding: June 2014 - Gold Hill Gardens

I was going to make the only suggestion that has been made so far! By having your parents names after yours, the “as they are united in matrimony” makes me smile. Obviously, you are not referring to all of you and your parents being married, but that’s a bit how it comes off – it’d be “better” or clearer for you to have your parents names above your names. 

Post # 9
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Bumble bee

I think it would be better if the parents were at the top, with your names in the middle. Like this (sorry for the quick photoshop edit)

Post # 13
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Bumble bee

Ayybety:  No problem! The other thing I wanted to mention- it is really picky, but: the & between your names isn’t prefectly centred under the tip of the design. I would have it moved a smidge to the left.

Here is the line, and the second one has the & centred. It is subtle, but would make me crazy haha

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