Rough Draft-Vows in progress

posted 3 years ago in Ceremony
Post # 2
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Bumble bee
  • Wedding: August 2014

Nice! I like it.

Post # 4
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Buzzing Beekeeper
  • Wedding: September 2015

I think its really nice.

I would cut either the “puzzle piece” or “complete me” idea because its the same idea and its stronger as a denser statement.

Also consider pushing yourself to explain why you love him with out generic “smart sweet fun” etc, though I know they are sincere, they dont come off emotionally. Like saying someones “nice” vs saying you are inspired by their empathy and compassion. YaknowwhatImean?

Really though, those are the only ideas I have for you- its  lovely.

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