(Closed) RSVP card — is the wording too cheesy?

posted 8 years ago in DIY
Post # 3
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Sugar Beekeeper
  • Wedding: February 2011

Its a wedding! i think celebration of love is just fine. 

Post # 4
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Sugar Beekeeper
  • Wedding: September 2010

I think celebration of love is better than lifetime. Lifetime would be more appropriate for a 50th anniversary or something.

Post # 5
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Honey bee
  • Wedding: June 2010

I think it looks and sounds great.  No need to change anything.

Post # 7
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Busy bee
  • Wedding: September 2010

I think it’s fine as well.

Post # 8
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Honey bee
  • Wedding: May 2010

What about Bride and Groom’s Wedding Celebration.

Post # 9
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Helper bee
  • Wedding: May 2010

Looks good to me; the question is whether you like them and not so much what other people will think…

Post # 10
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Honey bee
  • Wedding: July 2011

It sort of reminds me a bit of a dating show title: Rock of Love, Flavor of Love, (The Bachelor: On the) Wings of Love, Celebration of Love… It almost sounds as if you are titling your wedding, especially if that tick mark next to what is blurred out represents an apostrophe, as in John and Jane’s Celebration of Love. I don’t think I’d call it cheesy, but it may not be exactly what you were going for.

I do like caszos’ wording, as usual! Also, the tangerine and blue look great with the damask style!

Post # 11
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Busy bee
  • Wedding: August 2010

i think the mix of fonts on the back is a little too busy.  maybe stick with 2 fonts or even 3…  looks like you have 5 ont he back!

Post # 12
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Honey bee
  • Wedding: May 2010

Amaryllis:  I agree, I am just not a huge fan of “Celbration of Love” as it reminds me of those corny shows.

Post # 13
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Blushing bee
  • Wedding: July 2011

Agree with CorgiTales!  A wedding is a celebration of love for each other!  I say go for it 🙂

Post # 15
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Blushing bee
  • Wedding: June 2010

I like them.

Post # 16
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Sugar bee
  • Wedding: August 2010

I like what your going for. My suggestion would be the fonts… constancy is key. Also should probably be a bit similar to your wedding invitation. I also think that maybe you could try the same design on the back?? I would def be interested to see what that looks like. But good job!

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