So I just got proofs for my wedding invitations. However, the title of the RSVP says "Please Respond Soon". I don't know about anyone else but I'm not thrilled with that as the title. The cards already say please respond by at the bottom. What can we put to change the title at the top?
Mine says "Please Reply" at the top. Could I get any less creative?! I would have done RSVP, but I didn't like the way my font was in all caps. Am I seeing something different though? The link you provided says "Reply Soon Please" but I like that even less. Haha. I do like karieck05's idea about celebrating. A little bit more of a hint for people who may not know to RSVP, which seems to be a problem!
I think a simple RSVP would look fine! Great RSVP card! Did you see that WB giveaway awhile ago for cherry blossom parasols from ideal favors? They seem to have a ton of items featuring that theme. I have ordered a few items from them and the items have been great and the service prompt.
The first line is a script font, the date a text font. The card proceeds from there to provide the various boxes that need to be checked and lines that need to be completed.
Love the cherry blossom design, and the pink & brown color scheme!
You can change the title to just "Celebrate!".
Then on the bottom, since you are trying to avoid using the same word twice, change it to "We look forward to sharing our day with you. Please respond by..."
**One quick note, whatever you decide, I'd add a period to the end of both sentences at the bottom. Even though the two are on separate lines, it would look better and follow proper grammar to add the correct punctuation.
I'd put the "Please respond by Oct 15" in the pink box, and remove it from the bottom. I don't like the two lines at the bottom, and it's a little redundant how it is now. I also agree with SoCalBeachGirl -- I would add the punctuation.
So I just got proofs for my wedding invitations. However, the title of the RSVP says "Please Respond Soon". I don't know about anyone else but I'm not thrilled with that as the title. The cards already say please respond by at the bottom. What can we put to change the title at the top?
http://www.magnetstreet.com/proofs/EMC0161607D_0A_1E4735EF.pdf
posted by soontobeathurnher 14 posts 6 months agoWhat if it just said "Response"?
posted by nickyt 42 posts 6 months agoWhat about just "RSVP" at the top?
Or "Will you be Celebrating with us?"
Or "Reply Card"...
I agree...I don't like the "please respond soon" verbage...that's a hard one!
posted by karieck05 99 posts 6 months agoyou can always write out RSVP... Répondez s'il vous plaît
posted by nikkolec 55 posts 6 months agoMine says "Please Reply" at the top. Could I get any less creative?! I would have done RSVP, but I didn't like the way my font was in all caps. Am I seeing something different though? The link you provided says "Reply Soon Please" but I like that even less. Haha. I do like karieck05's idea about celebrating. A little bit more of a hint for people who may not know to RSVP, which seems to be a problem!
posted by LeahB 342 posts 6 months agoI think a simple RSVP would look fine! Great RSVP card! Did you see that WB giveaway awhile ago for cherry blossom parasols from ideal favors? They seem to have a ton of items featuring that theme. I have ordered a few items from them and the items have been great and the service prompt.
posted by ErinMarieMack 263 posts 6 months agoHow about "We look forward to hearing from you"?
posted by missm 485 posts 6 months agoMine read:
Kindly respond on or before
June 28th, 2008
posted by caliocteach 720 posts 6 months agonikkolec + soontobeathurnher,
We wrote it out as well (repondez etc...) Underneath that, we have "The favour of a reply is requested by...."
posted by JCM9608 470 posts 6 months agoOurs say:
Kindly respond...
by June 21, 2008
The first line is a script font, the date a text font. The card proceeds from there to provide the various boxes that need to be checked and lines that need to be completed.
posted by suzanno 1,975 posts 6 months agoLove the cherry blossom design, and the pink & brown color scheme!
You can change the title to just "Celebrate!".
Then on the bottom, since you are trying to avoid using the same word twice, change it to "We look forward to sharing our day with you. Please respond by..."
**One quick note, whatever you decide, I'd add a period to the end of both sentences at the bottom. Even though the two are on separate lines, it would look better and follow proper grammar to add the correct punctuation.
posted by SoCalBeachGirl 385 posts 6 months agoAnother idea...ours will say "Share Some Good News"
I used Magnet Street for our save the dates and I loved them! So cute!
posted by lhm11271983 10 posts 6 months agoI'd put the "Please respond by Oct 15" in the pink box, and remove it from the bottom. I don't like the two lines at the bottom, and it's a little redundant how it is now. I also agree with SoCalBeachGirl -- I would add the punctuation.
posted by rebecca 989 posts 6 months ago