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Save the date poem help, please!

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    asunw    June 10, 2011   Southern Illinois

    My fiancee and I are getting married at a winery called Starview Vieyards, so I came up with this poem to go on our save the dates but I don't like the 'i' line so if you could offer suggestions that would be great!

     

    Save
    The date;
    Aceremony awaits;
    Rings and
    Vows
    In place, to be
    Exchanged, J and S will be
    Wed.

     
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    daydreamwanderer       DC

    How about:

    Rings and

    Vows

    Involved

    Especially so J and S can be

    Wed

    ?

     
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    SuperBrook    5/7/2011   Kansas

    Maybe:

    Rings and

    Vows

    In Love

    Exchanged

     
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    Krises       NYC

    SaveThe date;

    Aceremony awaits;

    Rings and

    Vows

    In a white dress, J will be

    Exclaiming their love, for all to see,  J and S will be

    Wed.

    Not sure if this is the tone you are going for, but I thought I'd give it my best shot. I am definitely not a poet haha.

    *not sure if J or S is the bride so i took a shot*

     
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    Busy bee
    asunw    June 10, 2011   Southern Illinois

    @daydreamwanderer:  Thats awesome, thank you so much!

     
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    Busy bee
    asunw    June 10, 2011   Southern Illinois

    @Krises:  Oh I really like that too, yea!  I was so stuck and I love having options.  I'll have to see what the boy likes. =)

     
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    Krises       NYC

    @asunw: you're welcome! It's a cute idea.

     
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    daydreamwanderer       DC

    Oooh, I love @SuperBrook:'s option - I like how concise it is!

     
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    Busy bee
    asunw    June 10, 2011   Southern Illinois

    @daydreamwanderer:  I do too!  What do you think of

     

    Save
    The date;
    A ceremony awaits;
    Rings and
    Vows
    In love
    Exchanged so J and S will be
    Wed.

    or

    Save
    The date;
    A ceremony awaits;
    Rings and
    Vows
    In love
    Exchanged to be 
    Wed.

     
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    daydreamwanderer       DC

    I love putting your names into it :)

     

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