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Short story/poem

posted 2 years ago in Beehive
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    Bumble bee
    Br1tSh1n1ngStar    10/17/09   New Jersey

    Ok I wrote a little short story or poem about my wedding day, looking for some feedback, its rough I know just bear with me and since my computer is acting up I have to retype the entire thing in this little box.

    1 On that day I'll be in white, I will be so happy and filled with joy, thinking about my future with this man God has given to me to take care of. How can I be responsible for someone else?

    2 On that day my hair done, my makeup on, my veil covering my face. I will feel like a million bucks. My sisters and my mom will help get me ready as I prepare myself to be presented to my future husband.

    3 On that day I'll step into the limo, butterflies in my stomach. Only a short ride to the chuch where my beloved will be waiting for me to come to him.

    4 On that day my eyes will cry and my hands will tremble as I walk into new and scary territory, toward my love. He'll smile at me from the other end of our rose covered aisle and maybe I'll see a tear in his eye.

    5 On that day I'll take my place by my husband's side. We'll sing praises to our Lord for the love and life he's provided for us, as we start our journey together.

    6 On that day I'll feel so proud saying my vows to a christian man who loves the Lord and wants the best for me. As he takes my hand and says his vows, I'll know its forever.

    7 On that we'll be married in front of the people we love most. We'll spend time eating and laughing and dancing and celebrating the start of our future together.

    8 On that day I'll become his wife. It's crazy to think I now belong to someone. His arms will hold me, his lips will kiss me and we'll make love for the very first time.

    9 On that day I'll be in white, I'll become a wife, a lover and forever his best friend.

     

    Ok ladies don't be too harsh, but I numbered each one so if you're reffering to a specific part you can just use the number. Happy reading!

     
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    Bumble bee
    Br1tSh1n1ngStar    10/17/09   New Jersey

    How do I rename this to Short Story/Poem I wrote? I can't figure out how to edit my post.

     

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