Shower Invite – Need opinions/critique!

posted 5 years ago in Parties
Post # 3
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Helper bee
  • Wedding: June 2011 - Spring Grove Park & St. George Banquet Center

Hi! I like the trio of wine glasses in the upper-right, but I think the faint background scrolls/graphics are making the piece a wee bit busy. I would try sticking to a solid color or a consistent texture if you think the solid color is too plain (like a paper texture/image).

I think the wording at the top is cute, though if you’re going to capitalize ‘Bride’ then make sure you do it everywhere on the invite! For the wording on the bottom… I had a hard time reading it, but what I could make seemed to be a bit too serious for the wording at the top. I personally prefer the stanza at the top, myself. 🙂

Kohls has a typo…

Also, I’m sorry to say it (and take it or leave it), but I haaaaate the typeface Papyrus (as do most designers). It’s actually kind of a laughing stock font in the typography community, lol.

I hope that helps!

 

Post # 4
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Sugar bee

You have “bride” with a lower-case b in one part of the rhyme and “Bride” with a capital B later on … ditto the “Kohl’s” typo.

Post # 4
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Wannabee
  • Wedding: August 2015

I love this invitation. Any chance I can purchase it? 

Post # 5
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Wannabee
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