(Closed) Simple invites – help, thoughts, etc

posted 5 years ago in Paper
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  • Post # 3
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    Busy bee
    • Wedding: March 2012

    Very nice.  I love the simplicity. 

    One suggestion would be to have the “&” alone on it’s own line and possibly do it in the same color and font as the black.  This way your names stand out.  Other than that very nice.

     

    Post # 4
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    Buzzing Beekeeper
    • Wedding: December 2012

    Like the general look / layout a lot.

    Agree with Barika: regarding the extra line of text.

    From an Etiquette perspective, the “and” is usually on a line by itelf and as the written word not a “&” sign.

    Same with the element between the two sets of parents.

    Hope this helps,

    PS… To be honest, it would read better if it was the more “traditional” wording… but realize you might not have wanted that (because of who is actually paying)

    Mr. and Mrs. Rosie Cutie Bear Plums

    and

    Mr. and Mrs. Pumpkiin Sweetie Cupcakes

    Invite you to join them for the exchange of marriage vows by

    Rosie Plums

    and

    Pumpkin Cupcakes

    Then there would be no mistaking who all the players were, and who was marrying (currently it is cumbersome, and could appear that your Parents are the ones being wed… due to the Nouns being modified by the Verb following it)

     

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