So my vows came to me yesterday while I was surfing etsy…Thoughts?

posted 3 years ago in Ceremony
Post # 3
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Busy bee
  • Wedding: July 2013 - The front lawn of our church

@Waitingbee57:  I love them!!!!! So beautiful! They almost made me tear up! And I love how you’re incorporating the traditional vows too!  You could incorporate “to stand by you and love you” somewhere else, or just leave it out. I think it would be dramatic to end with “Forever is what I promise.” or “I promise you my forever.”

Post # 5
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Busy bee
  • Wedding: September 2014 - Banff, Alberta

@Waitingbee57:  I agree, finish it at forever is what I promise. They are very nice.

After i read the line “but most of all” i started singing that song “but most of all… but most of all… I wanna see you mooooove!” Yup, not helpful. 

Post # 7
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Bee Keeper
  • Wedding: March 2014

Wow, that’s tough. I sat here thinking for a good five minutes or so, and everything I have come up with has been unbearably corny.

 

Post # 8
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Helper bee
  • Wedding: October 2014

Omg I teared up. These are beautiful! I agree with ending it with “forever is what I promise”

Post # 10
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Buzzing bee

So Beautiful! Mine came to me, while I was at work. I think I was browsing Love quotes on Pinterest.

Post # 12
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Bumble bee
  • Wedding: June 2014

Nice vows. I really like the end. I wouldn’t personally use “partner in crime” or “pinky promise” in my vows but that’s just me. 🙂

Post # 15
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Busy bee
  • Wedding: November 2015

Lovely!! 

Post # 16
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Blushing bee
  • Wedding: May 2014

Love!

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