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posted 3 years ago in Paper
Post # 4
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3989 posts
Honey bee
  • Wedding: October 2011

Are these going to be actual business card size?

I think that “are getting married” is a little hard to read in that font.  Maybe try another font?

Post # 5
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1779 posts
Buzzing bee
  • Wedding: June 2014

@JessicaJupiter:  Cute! I don’t love the font for the ‘are getting married’ part. ‘Are’ and ‘Getting’ seem too close together and it makes it hard to read. Also, the I’s look like L’s in that font.

Post # 6
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3570 posts
Sugar bee
  • Wedding: September 2011

If Quinn is a man, I think your name should go first.

Post # 7
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2675 posts
Sugar bee
  • Wedding: May 2014 - Madison, WI

I agree on the “are getting married” font, a little hard to read, probably more so if these are going to be buisness card size. If you have a wedding website I would add that, otherwise just leave it as it is in terms of information.

Post # 10
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273 posts
Helper bee
  • Wedding: September 2014

@JessicaJupiter:  I think it is an improvement! The only issue I have is that the way that the “A” is shaped in “Save The Date” make is looks almost like “SHAVE” but I think that is just me and not an actual problem for you.

I agree with adding the evening reference because if it is on a Wednesday and they assume it is during the day they may just dismiss the idea of going entirely when they would otherwise set the time aside knowing it is an after work event.

It is really adorable and it would be cute if you can keep that design throughout your invitations as well.

Post # 12
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975 posts
Busy bee
  • Wedding: September 2014 - Banff, Alberta

@JessicaJupiter:  I also don’t like the font, try not to have all caps on a script. I found that the default for most wedding things was in the order Female and Male, and that is the rule for the invites as well. I don’t think you need to put the time of day, but could if it doesn’t make it too squished. 

Post # 13
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975 posts
Busy bee
  • Wedding: September 2014 - Banff, Alberta

@JessicaJupiter:  Just saw your update. Can the “getting married” part be uncaps or less bold? I didn’t notice “shave” and like the font for the save the date part. I would remove the colon. 

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