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I need your opinion on which wording for our STDs sounds better.
Right now it says:
Please join us for our wedding
May 15, 2009
Owatonna, MN
Formal invitation to follow
For more information, visit our website:
www.ourwebsite.com
We look forward to seeing you there!
Love
H&J
After asking my mom and sister/MOH for advice, my sister thought the wording should be:
Please plan to join us for our wedding
May 15, 2009
Owatonna, MN
Formal invitation to follow
For more information, visit our website:
www.ourwebsite.com
We look forward to seeing you there!
Love
H&J
The only difference is adding "plan to" into the 1st line. My sister felt that that phrase made it sound more like a STD and not an invite. I don't feel it's necessary to say "plan to" since it says formal invitiation to follow.
What do you think?