Stuck on wording! Please help :)

posted 3 years ago in Paper
  • poll: Would you change this wording?
    Keep it the way it is : (1 votes)
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    It's a little confusing : (1 votes)
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  • Post # 3
    109 posts
    Blushing bee


    invite you to their wedding?

    request the honour of your presence at their marriage?

    invite you to share the beginning of their new life together when they exchange marriage vows?

    You are invited to share in their joy as they exchange marriage vows?


    Post # 6
    3112 posts
    Sugar bee

    @krex:  I think you’re really over thinking this, but it’s easy to get caught in the minutea of wedding planning.  Sounds fine to me!

    Post # 7
    753 posts
    Busy bee
    • Wedding: May 2001

    invite you to celebrate on their wedding day

    as they exchange vows and become husband and wife

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