Thoughts on invitation wording?

posted 3 years ago in Paper
Post # 3
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Buzzing bee
  • Wedding: May 2013

I’m a former sub-editor so pardon my pedantry! However, you do seem to have too much “joy” in too few sentences! Also, it is “forty” not “fourty”.

I guess that the reference to Christ is important to you (although slightly contradictory because if two of you are incomplete without Christ, combining all three of you doesn’t make one entity unless you are also divine) but it’d also be useful to mention the word “wedding” in here somewhere too. 

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