(Closed) Very Non-Traditional wedding invite

posted 5 years ago in DIY
Post # 3
2287 posts
Buzzing bee
  • Wedding: Central Park

I would change the font color because right now it is hard to read.

Post # 4
1835 posts
Buzzing bee
  • Wedding: November 2012 - Oak Tree Manor

That photo is adorable! I agree with PP about changing the font color – or maybe you can keep the font white but outline it or create a shadow so it’s easier to read? I love the placement of the font but I would try out a serif font with a little bit more embellishment on the letters – or maybe a separate font for your two names to highlight them?

Post # 5
2106 posts
Buzzing bee
  • Wedding: September 2012

@Curly W:  Change the fonts- way too hard to read. Also, delete the “At” in “At 4:00 PM” because it is unnecessary and makes the name of the location seem unbalanced. Will there be a reception after or will there only be a ceremony? If there is a reception afterwards, add “Reception to Follow” or “Formal Reception to Follow” or “Cake and Punch Reception to Follow”

Post # 6
3574 posts
Sugar bee
  • Wedding: September 2011

I like them for a save the date, but not for a wedding invite, even if your wedding is non-traditional.  I think the font is a little cartoon-ey

Post # 7
2106 posts
Buzzing bee
  • Wedding: September 2012

Also the “with” in “Together With Their Parents” should not be capitalized. Also… what does tht phrase mean? Is that supposed to show that both sets of parents are hosting as well as the bride and groom? At that point you may as well skip the mention of the host and opt for a more… general opening. 

ETA: I know why it bothers me— because together with their parents they exchange their marriage vows. It sounds like you’re exchanging vows with your parents! Grammatically, you are all getting married to each other. 

Post # 8
2335 posts
Buzzing bee
  • Wedding: November 2012

Different font (maybe a serif font for your names and a sans serif for everything else) and text in a different color

Post # 11
882 posts
Busy bee
  • Wedding: June 2012

Are you guys already married or do you both have the same last name? In not—then just use your maiden name…you won’t have his until after you the wedding!


ETA: Wait—sorry! I just looked at it too fast—you don’t have the same last name….soooo, definitely change the font and color—it’s hard to read, LOL! 

Post # 13
1399 posts
Bumble bee
  • Wedding: July 2013

Cute! I’d use a serif font, though, change the color of the text, and not capitlize “As They Exchange Their Vows.”

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