Vows?

posted 3 years ago in Ceremony
Post # 3
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7997 posts
Bumble Beekeeper
  • Wedding: December 2013

Grammar fixes… I bolded parts of sentences that I changed. Some of it just did not make any sense grammatically and you’d mess up when trying to read or memorize it. I think for the 1001 thoughts sentence you should add something in like “with my 1001 constant thoughts” or something… it doesn’t quite make sense the way you worded it. I am assuming that you mean you’ve got a zillion things floating around in your head at any given time?

In Plato’s The Symposium he wrote, “According to Greek mythology, humans were originally created with 4 arms, 4 legs and a head with two faces. Fearing their power, Zeus split them into two separate parts, condemning them to spend their lives in search of their other halves.” rmr, 8 years ago I saw you walk into the classroom, messing with the teacher, and at that moment I instantly felt a connection to you. And still to this day, the only difference is that it has grown. Most people say they do not want someone to change them, but you have changed me into something so much better. Even with my 1001 thoughts you make me see what things are possible and help me see more of a brighter side. You have helped me though so much including the worst time of my life, you gave me that shoulder to cry on but also smiles of old memories. Between being friends and then lovers we have shared so many memories, smiles, laughs, tears, and some debates and I can’t wait to go through even more. I know whatever the future holds I can make it through with you by my side. Being with you I know that I have truly found my other half, my soulmate, and I could never be happier than I am at this very moment.

 

Post # 5
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7997 posts
Bumble Beekeeper
  • Wedding: December 2013

@rmrsln2010:  Lol you sound like me… the 1001 thoughts and the not liking speaking in front of people. Practice, practice, practice (even if you’re reading it). It’ll be fine. It goes so fast.

Post # 7
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16 posts
Newbee
  • Wedding: August 2014

I might cut out the quote. It feels disconnected from the very sweet, personal tone of the rest of the vows. Could you maybe include it on your program instead?

Post # 7
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370 posts
Helper bee
  • Wedding: September 2016

I think it’s beautiful, given the grammatical corrections the first replyer made. Those are vows I wish I could come up with! Congratulations.

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