Post # 1
We are writing our vows… but I guess mine turned into more of a love letter… but he said so did his… and I have read that there are no write or wrong ways to do this… but I need some feed back..Mine is a bit romantic and a little funny, what can I say I’m like to think I’m a peotic comedian..
Everyday you inspire me to be the happiest, healthiest, and most outragious Liv I can be. I hope I inspire you, and one day my efforts show you not only how I see you but the world sees you. You are the love of my life, the man of my dreams, and the most kind and sincere firend I have ever had. I cannot promise I will never get upset or say all the right things all the time, that would be unreasonable. But I can promise that no matter what happens in our life together I will always see the best you, because even your worst you is jaw dropping. I promise to always uplift, encourage, and care for you. I will fight and defend you. I will never walk behind or head of you, but always beside you. I will work with you to carve our own path, it is a path that has yet to even be seen. I believe in you, I believe in us, and with you I am fearless.
I love you.
Post # 3
@livalittle13: That’s sweet! If you’re looking for edits, I’m happy to take a stab at it, but I know verbage always helps keep it personal, The only thing I do want to comment on is this line:
“But I can promise that no matter what happens in our life together I will always see the best you, because even your worst you is jaw dropping.”
I see what you’re trying to say, but I just wanted to let you know that after I read that I went “wait, is that a good thing or a bad thing?” I think in general, I’d refrain from using words like “worst” in your vows. If you can spin that so that it says “because no matter what, you are always jaw droppingly gorgeous to me.” Or elaborate on the positive points. Does that make sense?
Generally, I love your vows though! 🙂 Great job!
Post # 5
I agree Pengoala… I wasn’t sure about that line either… I couldn’t get it down just right… that’s why I needed some insight!
I guess it doesn’t help I have been working on it at work during lunch! haha
Post # 6
@livalittle13: I actually really like that line. I agree about the term worst but I love the sentiment of jaw dropping. I think that is such an accurate feeling for so many people in love. Those moments where you just can’t help but be flawed by the person in front of you.
Also- the ending- with you I am fearless- made me swoon.