(Closed) Vows – Opinions

posted 4 years ago in Ceremony
Post # 3
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24027 posts
Honey Beekeeper
  • Wedding: September 2011

@livalittle13:  That’s sweet!  If you’re looking for edits, I’m happy to take a stab at it, but I know verbage always helps keep it personal, The only thing I do want to comment on is this line:

“But I can promise that no matter what happens in our life together I will always see the best you, because even your worst you is jaw dropping.”

I see what you’re trying to say, but I just wanted to let you know that after I read that I went “wait, is that a good thing or a bad thing?”  I think in general, I’d refrain from using words like “worst” in your vows.  If you can spin that so that it says “because no matter what, you are always jaw droppingly gorgeous to me.”  Or elaborate on the positive points.  Does that make sense?

Generally, I love your vows though! 🙂  Great job!

Post # 4
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7870 posts
Bumble Beekeeper
  • Wedding: October 2013

perfect, from the heart.

Post # 6
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769 posts
Busy bee

@livalittle13:  I actually really like that line. I agree about the term worst but I love the sentiment of jaw dropping. I think that is such an accurate feeling for so many people in love. Those moments where you just can’t help but be flawed by the person in front of you.

 

Also- the ending- with you I am fearless- made me swoon.

Lovely!

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