(Closed) Wedding Vows. What do you think?

posted 5 years ago in Ceremony
Post # 3
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Sugar bee
  • Wedding: September 2012

@monet11:  Since you said you’re doing this in addition to the traditional vows, I think it’s fine. The only thing I’d say about them is that you’re not vowing anything here, but that’s fine if you’re making vows elsewhere in the ceremony.

Post # 4
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Bee Keeper
  • Wedding: September 2012

@monet11:  I love it!  Beautiful! 

Post # 5
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Blushing bee
  • Wedding: April 2013

@monet11:  I love it!  It brought tears to my eyes 🙂

Post # 6
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Sugar Beekeeper
  • Wedding: November 1999

those are great! The only part that I got stuck on was this line: “I promise that everyday I will strive to be the best “us” we can be.” I get what you are trying to say, but it could use a bit of wordsmithing if you wanted to. 

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