(Closed) What do you think about my vows…

posted 6 years ago in Ceremony
  • poll: Do you think it's good?
    Tear jerker! : (13 votes)
    50 %
    Nah... it needs more work... : (6 votes)
    23 %
    Meh... : (7 votes)
    27 %
  • Post # 3
    2815 posts
    Sugar bee
    • Wedding: March 2012

    I think they are good!  They seem very heartfelt.  🙂

    Post # 4
    828 posts
    Busy bee
    • Wedding: September 2012

    You need to edit this part:

    “From the moment that we first met… I just knew that you were going to become someone very special to me…

     After getting to know more about you…   

     I just knew that you are my true love…”


    You use the phrase “I just knew” twice. I think that you can reword and combine these lines because it’s sort of redundant.

    Post # 5
    23636 posts
    Honey Beekeeper
    • Wedding: September 2011

    Agreed with the PP!  Other than that, these are sweet vows! 🙂

    Post # 6
    92 posts
    Worker bee
    • Wedding: June 2012

    I guess it depends on how personal you want them. To me, it sounds like you just got them off of a website. They’re very ordinary. If that’s what you’re looking for, then great. But if you’re writing your own it just seems like you’d want them more special?

    Post # 8
    155 posts
    Blushing bee
    • Wedding: September 2012

    Ditto! They’re good!!!!!


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