(Closed) What do you think of my invite? Need advice!

posted 8 years ago in Paper
Post # 3
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459 posts
Helper bee
  • Wedding: June 2010

I really like it. I’m not completely sold on the blimp (& I don’t know boston all that much) but if thats what boston does. I say keep it in there. You did a great job!!!

Post # 4
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272 posts
Helper bee

I think the last line, “A reception to follow…” is a little awkward.  Maybe leave off the A or put “A reception will follow…”?

 

P.S. it is so awesome that you’re getting married at the central library!  That’s like my dream venue (sigh).

Post # 5
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972 posts
Busy bee
  • Wedding: May 2010

Im from B-town and I love the Citco sign!!!! 

Post # 6
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2362 posts
Buzzing bee
  • Wedding: June 2010 - New York Botanical Garden

That is an awesome invite!

Post # 7
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979 posts
Busy bee
  • Wedding: May 2010

To me, “Reception to follow…” sounds even better.

Post # 8
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121 posts
Blushing bee
  • Wedding: August 2010

Yes, I agree::

Reception to Follow or Dinner & Dancing to Follow

at the

Popular Reading Room

 

So cute! My best friend lives in Boston, she’d love this!

 

Post # 9
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499 posts
Helper bee
  • Wedding: August 2010

I would take your last name off, as it’s implied you share your last name with your parents.  Just put your first and middle.

I’d also take “and” out of the year.  And denotes a decimal point.

Post # 10
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169 posts
Blushing bee
  • Wedding: July 2010

I think the skyline is very cute!  I am from MA…miss it

Post # 11
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209 posts
Helper bee
  • Wedding: September 2010

VFoster03 – hahaha, the blimp is a nod to the Red Sox – there’s always overhead coverage of the games from the blimp.  

I really like the overall design – i’m just not sold on the fonts.  I would suggest having different fonts for your names compared to the rest of the wording of the invite.

Post # 11
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209 posts
Helper bee
  • Wedding: September 2010

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